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pick one daisy
choose it wisely
count the petals
before your words

he loves me
underneath the sheets
he loves me not
walking out the door

he loves me
holding me tight
he loves me not
with a shift of his eyes

he loves me
when we're all alone
he loves me not
among others, though

he loves me
when i need him
he loves me not
i bother him

he loves me
with his smile
he loves me not
with scarring wit

he loves me
with his body
he loves me not
with his life
©2004-2009 ~phoenixtx
:iconphoenixtx:

Author's Comments

this is how i feel as of late.
and i know no better way to voice it.

(the average daisy has 34 petals. this one has 12. just pretend it's diseased or something.)

daisy from ~Stolck

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:iconstolck:
I love really your poem... :heart:
:iconzalisa:
This is really good. :) As always your poetry is amazing. :worship:

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I want you. GIMME! :D
:iconbhush:
very nice poem but how u feel as of late.
:iconzephyrkinetic:
Beautiful idea. Make it longer! Cure thy daisy! Or not. :shrug:

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[Align Thyself] [Read Me]
"Think of him as a sharp edge that doesn't compromise." =Prince-des-Sots
:iconphoenixtx:
eh?

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found religion inside myself
i drank the blood, the flesh was stale
:iconlocke-d:
Is that how you still feel?

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trends arise and descend
true beauty never ends
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member of ~dark-writing ~alug *daac adopted by: *earthfaerie
:iconlocke-d:
The poem itself is very well wrote but I am a lil worried if this is how our relationship is. I do think that you could possibly extend the poem but its good as it is too.

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trends arise and descend
true beauty never ends
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member of ~dark-writing ~alug *daac adopted by: *earthfaerie
:icondrift150:
...*sigh*..

great poem.. sorry to see you're feeling that way...

:hugs:
:iconsinfulbutterfly:
wow your words, explain how it is with my x and me really love this :)

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For you, I'd do anything just to make you happy, hear you tell me that you’re proud of me For them, I'll kill anything cut the throats of babies for them break they're hearts for they were them Waiting for you to say… I love you too

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