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on dionysus to his muse by ~phoenixtx:iconphoenixtx:



of patterns sent - patterns defined -
that trickle like grape leaves
     off of the vine

memory shrill, through the relapse of time
     - alms to alms -
to the goddess divine
©2008-2009 ~phoenixtx
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Author's Comments

yeah... no clue where to put this one. a break from the standard relationship poems i've been working on; wow.

written while wandering downtown portland.

you decide if the title fits the poem.

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:iconmerlinfmct87:
This reminds me a little of an abstract photograph. More about shapes and tones than an well-defined, obvious subject.

Of course, that could just be my obsessions talking.

I really like the connection between memory and falling leaves. Very powerful, original metaphor.

Merlin

--
When I tell any truth it is not for the sake of convincing those who do not know it, but defending those who do.
-Wiliam Blake

Every prophet is a cannibal, Every poet is a thief
all who kill their inspiration and lie about their grief

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